I didn't really enjoy this one over the past ones, it felt too cringy and slow. Just characters talking slow and that was the only focus instead of looking around at other stuff to catch your eye while in past parts they did have stuff going on. Relying on popular games or shows and there reference just feels that this one will fall into obscurity. The whole pokemon Go junk that is still going on is not really annoying but just tuning it out and hoping it would move along, it would be funny if just a random person would talk about how Pokemon Go was created seven or eight years ago when heartgold and soulsilver packaged pokemon pedometers with the game so you could travel with your pokemon from your game and also catch, level, and even find items. Same concept but done almost a decade ago without all the annoying updates. I'm probably alone on this one but that Patron paywall censorship was the most annoying thing about this, I know life imitating art junk but it is already stupid and tons of people post that junk here already. I know I should just enjoy it for what it is but the first part seem to have a better balance, you used just as many references to shows or games and the audio clips as well but it never was the focal point of the animation. That is what I feel is being lost in this one, instead the journey it was more of check out this meme or reference.
I appreciate you still giving it a watch nonetheless and thank you for the critique. I'll work to improve the pacing, balance, and content in the future.
Great job with the animation, it was fluid, well put together, and funny. A lot of the points in the content can cause arguments and heated discussions, such as pointing out the lack of videos an animator creates compared to Let's Players, the ability of being subscribed or unsubbing, or even stating having big plans or projects in the work.
I do apologize that people constantly harp at you for animations and content but the reason quite honestly is we're bored. We really just want something to enjoy and pass the time that has some good substance and when the lack of communication happens is when people move forward to lesser comedy. We just want a good laugh and a little escape. The only other reason people get after animators is when they want to use pay sites to get monthly paychecks off the back of old animations and not deliver for several months let alone update.
Mainly as viewers or people who support your craft and creativity really just want a little communication and update, we understand that it takes a long time but we really just want a little information on what is going on. Good luck with the content and looking forward to what you are creating.
The animation and art is solid, the one question I want to know is why can't you put this much time and dedication into your actual original content? You instantly jumped on the bandwagon of hate for what these people have done and have said you made this in a few days, why can't we see this level of determination in your original content? I get you would be busy with your job or what you need to do to survive but if you can find the time to make a very well polished animation talking about some shitheads on the internet there really is no excuse.
Excellent animation, you have a knack for story telling. Keep up the great work
Thank you, that's very kind of you.
The video compared to the other three is incredibly lacking in scale and volume, the story circling around might not be my type of comedy but still I was looking for something that still circled around the same notion as the other three, with minor griefing or pushing the story to a point that isn't a cliff hanger.
Animation is almost non-existent with a slight head or arm movement with simple lip movement but also relying heavily on camera zoom ins in where they give the illusion of shaking for the anger or pain moments.
There isn't as much shading or texture work, also the background is more muddled or more of the same that we have seen which is simplistic in its nature from the parody of the game.
It can be labeled as worse than the others and doesn't show improvement in work but lacking either by lack of time or energy into the animation. Also as this video is over three years old and has been placed on other video sites I can't say that there really is a show of improvement in this artist or writer.
Notice the time stamp, same person mind you.
It was funny and interesting, reminded me of old cartoons
It's good to see another animation from you man, I enjoyed your past works, and hey take it easy.
An incredibly well made Kickstarter funding video with the creation of what you love, you guys should check out Patreon as well. There are far to many so called animators and artist who fleece money from people without getting anything. You guys are different, you have a real spark and passion for this, and it should be rewarded as such. Best of luck in all your endeavors!
Eh comments are worthless on here because you disregard any that don't automatically like you even if they give constructive criticism.
Apparently someone didn't get their beauty sleep last night
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